It's Saturday Spankings time again! I do so love my spankings :D . 8 (or so) sentences of spanking fun. After you've enjoyed my snippet, please join the other spankos- their links are at the bottom of this post.
Scene set up: [from Out of the Night: Book One]... Tommy and Prisca have mightily displeased their master The Queen, who has sent Tommy ahead to the main playroom to "prepare" Prisca and Vala for his pleasure. He's already got Prisca bound to a whipping pole before these lines...
"Doesn't Vala look good over there?" Tommy asked as he turned Prisca to look at Vala's shuddering form huddled near the door. "Wouldn't you love to feel her coming against your mouth?"
Before Prisca could respond, Tommy backed away and struck her ass repeatedly. He placed her paddle on the floor. "Tell me, Prisca, how many times I just paddled you." His hands roamed over her body, his fingers pushing into the red spots on her ass and thighs.
"Uh... five, my Lord," Prisca whimpered.
Tommy laughed. "Good." He gave Prisca several more cruel whacks with her paddle. "Are you sorry yet for teasing The Queen like that in front of everyone?" he demanded as he whacked her calves until she began to dance.
If you want to find out if Prisca is sorry, you'll have to read Out of the Night: Book One (of "Vala's Story" series). You can get the buy link to whatever edition you want (print, Kindle, or Nook) here. Thanks for reading!
He's rough! There's something super hot about that… :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Natasha :) Tommy has his moments :D but to have a beautiful woman like Prisca to punish? Of course he got rough. There was lots of lip biting for me as I picked the words for the Seductive Studs and Sirens blog hop, which is from just shortly after this snippet- and yeah, the fact that Tommy's a switch because evident :D
DeleteNow that's masterful. Nice Snip Joelle
ReplyDeletethanks, Tara :)
DeleteGreat job, Joelle!
ReplyDeleteTommy is hardcore, wow!
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thanks, Katherine. yeah, Tommy always surprises me. He's a switch and often more submissive than dominant but when things like his behavior in this scene happen? yeah, all I can say is wow! even if he is my character :D
DeleteNow this is serious, and I definitely what to read more.
ReplyDeletethanks, PK. Well not knowing if you're on book buying grounding like I am- ugh, I really am working on all the ebooks in my Kindle, but my Master doesn't believe me- however if you go on over to my "My Books" page, you can grab the link for my free ebook on Smashwords. Tommy's not in any of the short stories shared, but there's an excerpt from same book this snippet came from, as well as my next book in the series and a bunch of other sex :D It's not spanking, but a wide variety of erotica.
DeletePaddled into the Spanky Dance! I love the set-up for this. And I'm curious about the "whipping pole." I'm going to have to head over to Smashwords and have a look about!
ReplyDeletethanks, Alice. but ack, I didn't "break out the pole" for any of my stories in my free ebook. Maybe I'll have to write something special for SatSpanks :D.
DeleteAi-yi-yi! Love this intense lil snippet. Wow.
ReplyDeletethanks, Normandie :)
DeleteBegan to dance...hot Joelle as always. ;)
ReplyDeletethanks, Suzy. :D isn't it fun? wanting the paddle but not? lol
DeleteOwww! Whacking her calves. Good snippet.
ReplyDeletethanks, Starla. yup, the calves are bad- Prisca was in trouble :D
DeleteGreat snippet. Ow, on the calves.
ReplyDeletethanks, Daizie. :D I pressed my legs against my chair when I was writing it lol
DeleteMore than a little slap and tickle going on here. Nice snippet.
ReplyDeletethanks, Cara. oh definitely :D trying to pick 8 lines... Tommy did several things both before and after these lines to Prisca :D
DeleteVery hot, Joelle;)
ReplyDeletethanks, Mary
DeleteHot snippet Joelle! I love the visual of the spanky dance :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Constance. yup, spanky dance :D it's a fun thing lmao
Deleteooh, the calves-- that seems mean! Very hot.
ReplyDeletethanks, Renee. yeah, Tommy was pretty angry at the moment
DeleteI'm right with you on that wonderful, not-really-existent line between spanking and BDSM, Joelle! Great job!
ReplyDeletethanks, Emily. it's a precarious line to walk :D but even subs can do the spanky dance :D
DeleteYowza! Paddling the calves means business. She better shape up, but maybe she doesn't really want to??? Nice snippet
ReplyDeletethanks, Maddie. I think Prisca bratted her way into far more punishment than she's intended :D
DeleteYikes. Never had my calves done. Sounds rough. Great snippet, very hot!
ReplyDeletethanks, Angie. Yeah, on the calves is rough, regardless of what implement is used.
DeleteOuch! Now that's one hardcore master! And he's subservient to The Queen? Holy Hannah! It's hard to imagine someone even more dominant than Tommy.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Maren. nods, Tommy's a switch and for the most part, leans more toward the sub side. I know :D this snippet doesn't show that. I've worked hard to create a dom (The Queen) and switches and submissives who are totally fleshed out people and have complex sexualities.
DeleteHmm, it's never wise to make fun of the head alpha male. Punishment is almost guaranteed to follow, and it's usually intended to make the transgressor very sorry for her lapse. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteyeah, not a wise move at all... and the scene this snippet comes from is just the very beginning of Prisca's punishment because she messed up pretty decently and then manages to make it worse by not responding to a summons
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