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Friday, October 11, 2013

#SatSpanks ... It's just pretend, right?

It's Saturday Spankings time again! I do so love my spankings :D . 8 (or so) sentences of spanking fun. After you've enjoyed my snippet, please join the other spankos- their links are at the bottom of this post.




This week I've decided to play with my WIP, "Vala's Recuperation"- at least that's what I'm calling it this morning as I get my separate Saturday Spankings and Seductive Studs and Sirens' posts up :D. I've done various short stories to cover the time when Vala was getting better in The Queen's loft, but this WIP is taking on those 6 months from his POV. It's in moments like this that I'm reminded how polyamorous my perspective is...

The Queen has been with Tommy 14 years at this point. They have a very rich back story that I've worked specifically with in two spin-offs before this. In reading more about the BDSM idea of "Daddy Doms," it seems in many ways, The Queen is much more that for Tommy and Vala than any other Dom role. Today's excerpt comes from the recuperation WIP where the men are further exploring ageplay.

The Queen allowed the slaps to wander down to the tops of Tommy's thighs. He grimaced and redoubled the spanks to the quivering thighs. The blood rushed to his cock. Role play. This is pretend. He cupped his hand and returned to spanking the cheeks, red going to purple in places. Looks so good.

"Please, Daddy! It hurts too much. Please stop, Daddy!" Tommy sniffed loudly.

Gods, I've made him cry!

So yes, I'm just a bit over 8 sentences, but some of them are short :D. However I'll happily take my spankings as I've been too anxious because of my yearly check up to beg my Master to spank me at all :( I figured this one would be fun to share after me starting the conversation about crying and spanking in the group :D.

32 comments:

  1. I love the elation the Queen feels after making him cry.
    Great snippet, Joelle!

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    1. thanks, LA. You know, it's like I was talking with a BR last night. Normally The Queen doesn't have a thing for "crying to spanking," nor is this a regular type of play for them, but oh yeah, he surprisingly enjoyed it :D

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    1. thanks, Cara :) Now if I can manage that in my poly spanking :D

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  3. Like the reference to role play and am curious for more. our writing is lovely.

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    1. thanks, Natasha. While I've been enjoying this, it has been instructive for me, to work with ageplay. See, The Queen is a father of a toddler so he's still trying to find that balance as a parent and also as a D/s person living with an interest in ageplay

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  4. Wow...intense! Great snippet, Joelle!

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    1. thanks, Sue. I must admit, even I was surprised how intense it came out when I finished writing the scene.

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  5. It's quite an wonderful scene where the characters shine.

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  6. Excellent characters - roll play, maybe...

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    1. thanks, PK. they were great to work with

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  7. I love the emotion in this scene Joelle! Very intense.

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  8. Talk about a cliffhanger... Good Stuff.

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  9. Is he going to get punished more when the Queen realises he was acting??? Great snip but cruel to stop there. Follow up next week pretty please???

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    1. You know, I'm not sure if/how/where I'd snippet from this specific scene (although don't worry, I plan to snippet more from it as I write), so I'm going to answer your question. I'm specifically working in this WIP to consider an ageplay element between the men. Like I explained in my scene set up, they have 14 years of (romantic) relationship behind them, as well as a "star crossed, forbidden by parents) love story behind them. So no, there's no further punishment coming because the intent was for Tommy to role play. Whether he embraces his "little" is one thing to see, but he's doing what he's supposed to.

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  10. Sigh. I love Daddy Doms. Hot snippet, Joelle, love how real your writing feels.

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    1. yeah, they are fun. Thanks for the comment, Normandie. You know, your comment gets me thinking of a conversation I've been having with a kink activist friend of mine, how we tend to get wrapped up in "either or" thinking... I had to break through that a bit to write the scene this snippet is from. I got so lost in "what would a Daddy dom" think/want etc that I lost sight of what The Queen wants/needs... and he's the POV character so it's important I'm focusing on him lol

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  11. Beautiful interplay between the two characters, Joelle.

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    1. thanks, Renee. And there'll be more. It seems that in this WIP, ageplay is doing good things for The Queen and Tommy, so there'll no doubt be more snippets.

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  13. What I really like about this was his release. I'm not talking sexually either. The potential for such emotional release during a session with extreme vulnerability and full trust.
    And the addition of the age play seems to add even more power to the situation.
    This was beautiful.
    :)

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    1. Thanks, Katherine. yeah, the release, I totally understand. I was thinking this morning after reading your comment how important this is... in my series, the sex and BDSM are firmly settled in relationships, in this case "the great love" between The Queen and Tommy, 14 years together here. So first I was looking for an emotional release for both men- it's quite a few pages later when the sexual release comes :D

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  14. Nothing gets me going like a "Daddy". Nice.

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    1. thanks, Abbie. yeah, it's fun. I loved writing when The Queen instructed Tommy to say "Daddy" instead of 'my Queen" fun fun :D

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  15. What a fun scene.

    Hope all goes well w/your check up. :)

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    1. thanks, on both accounts, Celeste. Although like I vented in a post recently- there is no Dr Karl for my Master to pay to see me and because of my silly cycle and seeing a doctor who's part of a clinic, I know have to wait another month to see a nurse practitioner instead :(

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  16. It's nice to see age play between two males for a change!

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    1. thanks, Angie. I've decided it's going to be a major theme in this WIP. I'm having fun with it.

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