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Friday, October 18, 2013

#SatSpanks ... Begging for a spanking

 It's Saturday Spankings time again! I do so love my spankings :D . 8 (or so) sentences of spanking fun. After you've enjoyed my snippet, please join the other spankos- their links are at the bottom of this post.

I've returned to my polyamorous BDSM WIP, "The Five." I'm still working to take them from one (the switch Etan) to the poly family of 5. Here, Etan has ordered his innocent little submissive Harlequin to go beg Hatsu for a spanking, as the darling girl has just admitted to an attraction to "some women." So just a little tease :D I plan to tease you with snippets from this scene for the next four weeks after this one. We are in Hatsu's POV, the Domme whom both Etan and Harlequin find attractive.
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Hatsu watched the girl's body move, the spandex bodysuit he had her wearing tonight sliding with her gorgeous movements. Not letting her know she turns me on just yet. She held her breath when the girl stopped inches in front of her feet and knelt up. The fabric shifted around the taut little breasts as submissive arms moved up for the girl to fold her hands on her neck.

"Miss?" Harlequin murmured.

"Yes?" Hatsu openly studied the girl's body.

"Ah... would you please... spank me, Miss?" Harlequin's gaze danced over Hatsu's pointed red heels.

"Your dominant would be okay with me spanking you?" Hatsu challenged.


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32 comments:

  1. Great bit of teasery. I'm thinking Harlequin might like this.

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    1. thanks, Daizie. oh yeah, Harlequin's still having a lot of fun as I'm finishing this scene :D

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  2. You certainly weave complex stories!

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    1. thanks, Cara. I'm pretty sure I'm incapable of simple monogamy, either in fiction or real life :D

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  3. What a tease you are. Great snippet.

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    1. thanks :D yup, I'm skilled in tease ... speak it as a second language lol

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  4. I love her little bit of apprehension when she asks Hatsu for a spanking. I think that Etan is going to very much enjoy watching as Hatsu obliges. ~Smirks~
    Hot little tease, Joelle. Love it!

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    1. thanks, LA. A little apprehension is good, I think :D I do find something of a dominant getting to enjoy another spanking his/her/hir submissive, to watch, a joy

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  5. Very interesting little snippet. I like the visual of the outfit.

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    1. Thanks, PK. I was happy to think of the bodysuit- my Master doesn't like typical lingerie nor does He like play outfits, like French maid dresses, so I'm forced to think differently on what clothing will be arousing.

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  6. Teasing indeed, I like how Hatsu won't let her know she's turned on "yet" and she has to ask for her spanking.

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    1. thanks, Tara :D I do like to tease :D oh yes, make the submissive wait on the dominant's pleasure... not easy IRL for the submissive but oh so lovely to write

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  7. There's something about the top choosing the clothes that's just really wonderful!

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    1. yeah :) except when they pick what you don't like lol

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  8. Interesting tease. Always does something for me when a character asks for a spanking.

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    1. yeah. me too. I'd pondered going back and doing the first snippet from this scene of Etan actually delivering the order, but it'd gotten so luscious by this point when Harlequin is nearing Hatsu. thanks for the comment, Casey

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  9. Asking for a spanking is embarrassing, for me anyway, but Harlequin carried it off like a pro. I believe Etan is going to feel very tender toward his little sub.

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    1. thanks for the comment, Mary. Yeah, Harlequin getting through the begging with only 2 stammers? I've been with my Master 13-ish years and I pretty much speak a novel trying to get around directly asking for a spanking lmao

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  10. Poly of 5 - WOW! Sexy little tease, Joelle. Tease being the key word there...

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  11. lol thanks, Natasha. Yeah, I'll have snippets for some time from this one. I'm not quite sure how much time I'm going to stay with just the three before I introduce the last two.

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  12. Submission is beautiful in any form. :)

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    1. yes it is, Patricia. I loved showing Harlequin working to please both the doms in these snippets

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  13. I agree with the others, Joelle, you are being a tease this week! This was a hot snippet. :)

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    1. thanks, Sue :) yes, I specialize in tease... but you all only have to wait until next Friday night for a little more of these 3 ;D

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  14. A poly family of five? This should be fun!

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    1. yup of 5... different genders, orientations, roles... all in one poly family.. I'm hoping to get somewhere with it even as I'm nano-ing :D

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  15. I love when they ask for a spanking ;) -Suzy

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    1. hey Suzy, thanks for the comment... yeah, even better when they're ordered to ask :D

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