It's Saturday Spankings time again! I do so love my spankings :D . 8 (or so) sentences of spanking fun. After you've enjoyed my snippet, please join the other spankos- their links are at the bottom of this post.
I've returned to my polyamorous BDSM WIP, "The Five." I'm still working to take them from one (the switch Etan) to the poly family of 5. Here, Etan has ordered his innocent little submissive Harlequin to go beg Hatsu for a spanking, as the darling girl has just admitted to an attraction to "some women." So just a little tease :D I plan to tease you with snippets from this scene for the next four weeks after this one. We are in Hatsu's POV, the Domme whom both Etan and Harlequin find attractive.
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Hatsu watched the girl's body move, the spandex bodysuit he had her
wearing tonight sliding with her gorgeous movements. Not letting
her know she turns me on just yet. She held her breath when the
girl stopped inches in front of her feet and knelt up. The fabric
shifted around the taut little breasts as submissive arms moved up
for the girl to fold her hands on her neck.
"Miss?" Harlequin murmured.
"Yes?" Hatsu openly studied the girl's body.
"Ah... would you please... spank me, Miss?" Harlequin's
gaze danced over Hatsu's pointed red heels.
"Your dominant would be okay with me spanking you?" Hatsu
challenged.
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Great bit of teasery. I'm thinking Harlequin might like this.
ReplyDeletethanks, Daizie. oh yeah, Harlequin's still having a lot of fun as I'm finishing this scene :D
DeleteYou certainly weave complex stories!
ReplyDeletethanks, Cara. I'm pretty sure I'm incapable of simple monogamy, either in fiction or real life :D
DeleteWhat a tease you are. Great snippet.
ReplyDeletethanks :D yup, I'm skilled in tease ... speak it as a second language lol
DeleteI love her little bit of apprehension when she asks Hatsu for a spanking. I think that Etan is going to very much enjoy watching as Hatsu obliges. ~Smirks~
ReplyDeleteHot little tease, Joelle. Love it!
thanks, LA. A little apprehension is good, I think :D I do find something of a dominant getting to enjoy another spanking his/her/hir submissive, to watch, a joy
DeleteVery interesting little snippet. I like the visual of the outfit.
ReplyDeleteThanks, PK. I was happy to think of the bodysuit- my Master doesn't like typical lingerie nor does He like play outfits, like French maid dresses, so I'm forced to think differently on what clothing will be arousing.
DeleteTeasing indeed, I like how Hatsu won't let her know she's turned on "yet" and she has to ask for her spanking.
ReplyDeletethanks, Tara :D I do like to tease :D oh yes, make the submissive wait on the dominant's pleasure... not easy IRL for the submissive but oh so lovely to write
DeleteThere's something about the top choosing the clothes that's just really wonderful!
ReplyDeleteyeah :) except when they pick what you don't like lol
DeleteInteresting tease. Always does something for me when a character asks for a spanking.
ReplyDeleteyeah. me too. I'd pondered going back and doing the first snippet from this scene of Etan actually delivering the order, but it'd gotten so luscious by this point when Harlequin is nearing Hatsu. thanks for the comment, Casey
DeleteAsking for a spanking is embarrassing, for me anyway, but Harlequin carried it off like a pro. I believe Etan is going to feel very tender toward his little sub.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Mary. Yeah, Harlequin getting through the begging with only 2 stammers? I've been with my Master 13-ish years and I pretty much speak a novel trying to get around directly asking for a spanking lmao
DeleteOooh! So hot.
ReplyDeletethanks, Abbie. yeah :D it's good
DeletePoly of 5 - WOW! Sexy little tease, Joelle. Tease being the key word there...
ReplyDeletelol thanks, Natasha. Yeah, I'll have snippets for some time from this one. I'm not quite sure how much time I'm going to stay with just the three before I introduce the last two.
ReplyDeleteVery sexy. Nice job.
ReplyDeletethanks, Celeste :)
DeleteSubmission is beautiful in any form. :)
ReplyDeleteyes it is, Patricia. I loved showing Harlequin working to please both the doms in these snippets
DeleteI agree with the others, Joelle, you are being a tease this week! This was a hot snippet. :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Sue :) yes, I specialize in tease... but you all only have to wait until next Friday night for a little more of these 3 ;D
DeleteA poly family of five? This should be fun!
ReplyDeleteyup of 5... different genders, orientations, roles... all in one poly family.. I'm hoping to get somewhere with it even as I'm nano-ing :D
DeleteI love when they ask for a spanking ;) -Suzy
ReplyDeletehey Suzy, thanks for the comment... yeah, even better when they're ordered to ask :D
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