8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.
So have I teased you enough yet :D? You read Joey earning her punishment before they went to the guestroom. Of course Mara forced her little girl to talk about how, why she earned this spanking. Today you get to enjoy pants, panties down... Joey getting into position and the first smack... enjoy :)
(Giggles... and yeah, I need my own spanking for going a few more than the 9 or 10 sentences that might be overlooked to maybe 12... but they're good ones :D)
"Pull your pants and panties to your ankles and then lay across my lap."
"Yes, Mommy." It seemed like my body was of two minds- the anxious, upset little girl pulling her pants down and the slave, maybe, getting turned on at the idea of being spanked. The cotton panties felt weird against my fingers in that moment as they joined my pants pooling around my ankles. I lifted my gaze to Mommy's pretty skirt; I wondered a little at how different it would be to spanked on Mommy's silk covered lap, instead of Master's jean- or hair-covered legs. My silly shirt with the dogs slid over the fabric as I obeyed Mommy, my hands reaching out for the bedrail to steady myself.
"I've never been one for the whole 'counting the whacks' thing." Mommy brushed her warm hand over my naked butt, sending shivers up my spine. "I will spank you until I'm satisfied with how remorseful you are."
"Yes, Mommy," I whimpered. The first wallop from the antique hairbrush caught me mid-breath. The sound of the violins was oddly teasing as the pain radiated through me- this was nothing like a regular BDSM spanking, at least not to me. I released the breath fully.
That moment when she notices the skirt is absolutely wonderful, Joelle! From the heart of ageplay. I love it.ReplyDelete
thanks, Emily :) I think a nice Mommy should wear a pretty skirt and that's what I did in this sceneDelete
I love the two people inside Joey and how each are engaged.ReplyDelete
thanks, PK. It's been really important for me in this WIP to show all 3 (well in this scene you only get 2), but Josephine the person, Josephine the slave, and Joey the teen girl.Delete
Love how her thoughts are all jumbled as she awaits that first spank.ReplyDelete
thanks, Leigh. yeah, I pictured her mind being all jumbled like thatDelete
oh, yummy, Joelle (it must be christmas, because I typed Noelle first--LOL).ReplyDelete
naughty :D I was just joking with my son when he saw a "first noel" sign at the mall- "you don't think I heard that every year on the bus growing up?" (all school years until the last 4 of high school, I had to ride). but thanks for the yummy, Renee.Delete
You capture the moment so well.ReplyDelete
thanks, Cara :)Delete
I really liked how you differentiated how Joey was feeling. The little girl-scared, worried. and then the slave- the anticipation and the arousal. Push it along to publication Joelle I wanna read this. ヅ ツ ッReplyDelete
ah thanks, LA. I'm pushing. I'm trying to do something for my blog tomorrow and Monday. Then there's pushing the first two books of Vala's Story into readiness to be formatted and released (a re-release of "Out of the Night" and first release for "Gates of the Garden"). But here's hoping that all that happens and I get to Mommy- I did joke this morning that- par for the course in my crazy household- my teen is trying to keep my fictional characters from having sex :DDelete
Too bad the skirt isn't taffeta, so it could make that wonderful sound. Great snippet, Joelle!ReplyDelete
lol, I didn't even think of taffeta, Angie! I was thinking more the texture difference for Joey, getting to enjoy the silk of Mommy's skirt, even as she's getting her first bad girl spanking. thanks for the commentDelete
I love the array of personas and your descriptions were perfect and seamless. I'm working on a little/Daddy Dom story now and also find that the various shades of a person can tumble out at the same time.ReplyDelete
thanks for the comment, Daizie. I think it's neat to work with those pieces of a person, but then I don't like things too neat :DDelete
I like the sensations Joey experiences, and it doesn't seem like BDSM to me at all. Just pure age play, but I guess this "family" takes on different roles based on the situation. At times Joey must be the "slave" and at other times the lovingly disciplined little girl. I didn't realize that until the comparison entered Joey's mind. Intriguing snippet, Joelle.ReplyDelete
thanks for the comment, Kathryn. I'm glad it doesn't seem like BDSM at all to you. Of course going on total imagination here, as my personal interest in ageplay isn't really as much as Joey's, it'd seem that the types of spankings would be very differentDelete
You grabbed my attention with the title Joelle ;) what a great snippet...loved it so much.ReplyDelete
thanks a bunch, Suzy. I enjoyed that one- Joey bought the brush, not thinking it was going to end up being used on her butt, I thinkDelete