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Friday, November 29, 2013

#SatSpanks ... You must walk to get your spanking

8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.

I continue a little further from the snippet I shared last week. Mommy's taken Joey to the guest room, a beautiful room with a picture perfect daybed that Joey has worked so hard to decorate this last month. Poor Joey's anxiety is building. She doesn't know what to expect of the first spanking from Mommy.
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Once all the way through the doorway, Mommy moved around me and to the daybed. She turned on a stereo and classical music started to play.

She looked up at me. "Close the door."

I turned around to obey, my hand shaking as it touched the yellow painted door that I'd been so proud to install. I heard a small click when the door was closed.

"Now come here."

I took small steps and focused on the floor.
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30 comments:

  1. PK CoreyNovember 30, 2013 at 8:45 AM

    I just went back and read last weeks snippet too. Very interesting concept and I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 9:05 AM

      thanks, PK. I need to spend the moment- after my local Nano write-in - putting that link in. It's going well, despite my life's worries this month. I hope to have a finished WIP that an publisher likes soon :)

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  2. PattyNovember 30, 2013 at 9:20 AM

    Oh boy, I think she's in for it!

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:19 PM

      yup :D thanks for the comment. it was a fun scene to write. I imagine myself saying "no!" to my Master like Joey did to her Mommy- oh, such a bad thing to do

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  3. Maren SmithNovember 30, 2013 at 9:21 AM

    Ooo, I want more. I can't wait for this one to come out, Joelle. Poor Joey's level of anxiety can't handle much more! Good job!

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:21 PM

      thanks, Maren. I'm having a rough day and may not finish for nano- I still have 7100-ish words to write for 50K- but the WIP itself is moving forward well. I'll just need to get a few betas to read it before I send it off to publishers.

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  4. Aimless RamblingNovember 30, 2013 at 9:25 AM

    Interesting topic. I want to see how it plays out.

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:23 PM

      thanks Leigh :) I'm hopeful to finish and get it published- no self-pubbing on this one if I can a publisher. I had had one ending scene thought out, but I think I have an epilogue in mind that'll wrap the story up nicely.

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  5. UnknownNovember 30, 2013 at 10:10 AM

    Nicely done, the little steps and looking at the floor add to Joey's little girl image. Looking forward to the finished product.

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:27 PM

      thanks, Tara :) I thought about my Master and I as I was writing Joey's walk. I made her the same height as me. Even if I'm trying to keep up with Him, He's gotta slow down because one of His steps easily makes up several of my normal steps.

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  6. Ruth StauntonNovember 30, 2013 at 10:36 AM

    Great anticipation. I can feel her anxiety. Also ditto what Tara said.

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:39 PM

      thanks, Ruth. the details in this scene came out so nice :)

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  7. Emily TiltonNovember 30, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    The shaking hand did it for me, Joelle! Nice!

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:42 PM

      thanks, Emily. yeah, I pictured by this point she'd be shaking and when she reached for the door was the perfect moment to have the detail in the scene

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  8. Celeste JonesNovember 30, 2013 at 1:36 PM

    Punished in the room she decorated. Interesting. :)

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 1:52 PM

      thanks, Celeste. I had so much fun with that. I've been playing with Joey only seeing a bit of how the doms are becoming friends- depending if you've caught any non #satspanks' posts with "Mommy" you might not have seen the back story that Mommy has been a dom for awhile, but nothing felt right until she started learning about AP. Of course, dom's prerogative, Joey isn't privy to their conversations unless they decide to tell her :D

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  9. Cara BristolNovember 30, 2013 at 9:00 PM

    Classical music...interesting. Remember Ravel's Bolero from the Movie 10? I wonder what would make good music to spank to.

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 10:33 PM

      Somehow it just made sense to me. Joey was raised Mormon and many Mormons I know were raised listening to classical movie to the exclusion of modern music. Hm, not familiar, I'll have to look it up tomorrow. thanks for the comment, Cara

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  10. UnknownNovember 30, 2013 at 9:21 PM

    I loved the details through her eyes as she focused on doing what she was told. Lovely snippet Joelle :)

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    1. Joelle CasteelNovember 30, 2013 at 10:34 PM

      thanks, Constance. It was in this scene that my decision to write the story first person in Joey's perspective really was confirmed for me as the right choice

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  11. Angela SargentiDecember 1, 2013 at 12:07 AM

    Oh, the walk of dejection and reluctance!

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    1. Joelle CasteelDecember 1, 2013 at 7:29 AM

      yup :D thanks for the comment, Angie. poor Joey. I can imagine she's not wanting to see her Mommy sitting on the pretty daybed now :D

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  12. UnknownDecember 1, 2013 at 10:39 AM

    Listen Joelle, you just have to miscount the 8 sentences. You do this every time with leaving us hanging at JUST THAT POINT!!!

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    1. Joelle CasteelDecember 1, 2013 at 1:34 PM

      lmao Natasha :D patience! :D and I already have next week set up. Just gotta wait until Headmistress gets the sign up on the blog so I can sign up, and I think it was next week that I was naughty and went over :D So would it be nice of me to ask if you'd like to be one of the BR when I finish it? hopefully in the next week or two? :D

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  13. Kathryn R. BlakeDecember 1, 2013 at 3:17 PM

    I agree with Natasha. I'm sure Headmistress Blake won't object if you were to add a few more sentences rather than leave us hanging. Though, as an author, it's good to leave your readers hanging so they want more.... However, I'm sorry to read your comment about having life's worries in November. Here's hoping December will work out better for you. Take care.

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    1. Joelle CasteelDecember 1, 2013 at 3:27 PM

      Thanks, Kathryn :) but really, I do think I bent the rules a little as I was coming up with the next few weeks. Saturday Spankings hop is one of the blog themes I can really plan ahead for and I have through 12/20 already planned, I think.

      Yeah, I'm hoping on December. mother and mother-in-law need to not scare me with health stuff. I'm sure my Master will have a new job asap; He wouldn't be able to stand Himself if He didn't. The first day of Ana's Advent Calendar was really nice, knowing that I'd have the fun of that to look forward to. And now I'm enjoying setting up for the Winter Spanks hop

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  14. Maddie Taylor RomanceDecember 1, 2013 at 5:26 PM

    Poor Joey, to be taken to the room she had worked so hard on... Her trembling hand gives it away. Nice snippet

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    1. Joelle CasteelDecember 1, 2013 at 10:07 PM

      yes, Maddie. thanks for the comment- you know, in the fullness of all the decorating, which obviously I wasn't going to put into satspanks... and then her first spanking happens there ? :D I was quite proud to think of it :D

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  15. AnonymousDecember 1, 2013 at 8:28 PM

    Poor Joey. That first spanking can be so scary, and every little detail seems magnified.

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    1. Joelle CasteelDecember 1, 2013 at 10:09 PM

      thanks, Johnna. yup, the yellow door. I could imagine being Joey and noticing such a seemingly inconsequential thing in the moment

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