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Friday, November 22, 2013

#SatSpanks ... "Little girls shouldn't talk to their mommies like that."

8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.

So I decided to share from the first (and possibly only) spanking scene in my Nanowrimo age play WIP. Since both women, the Mommy and the little girl, are finding themselves in AP, I took a rather slow approach with them. Especially as they first played online, through text, then I'm playing to add some "phone sex"- how limited that phrase is in this case :D. I think I'm going to give you about 5 weeks or so of snippets from this scene... so then once I finish Nanowrimo, I can get back to "the 5" and give you move of Hatsu, Etan, and Harlequin.

Here you get to see how Joey earns her first spanking from her Mommy.

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I piled the last box of orange gelatin on the counter. "No," I snapped at Mommy when she stepped beside me.

Mommy took me by both shoulders and turned me to face her.

"I'm sorry, Mommy. I didn't mean to." I immediately felt horrible at my mean voice.

"What was that attitude for?" Mommy demanded.

I didn't want to look at Mommy's frowny face. "I don't know, I'm sorry, Mommy. Please forgive me, Mommy." I pressed my lips together.

"Little girls shouldn't talk to their mommies like that." Mommy continued to hold on shoulder and urged me into the hallway.

28 comments:

  1. Why do you stop THERE Joelle? Unkind of you really.

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    1. But I'm already worried about a spanking from the Headmistress 'cause I'm a little bit over :D Don't worry though, Natasha... you just have to keep coming back- I have a few weeks of SatSpanks with Joey and her Mommy :D

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  2. I can certainly see NaNoWriMo has been very productive for you. Nice one, Joelle, love the petulance and the immediate regret. I'm guessing the regret will be stronger yet.

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    1. oh yes, she'll feel worse :D I was surprised, Tara, how much I enjoyed writing this spanking once I got to it. Although I really loved the cuddles and care afterward.

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  3. I didn't know you were trying an ageplay...best of luck with it! The Mommy dynamic is one that deserves more exploration.

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    1. Thanks, Ana- you know, I got so frustrated trying to find anything about Mommies. And the few times I found Mommies, it was always with little boys. I think I find one article that mentioned a Mommy/little girl dynamic. It's been interesting, experimenting. I'm looking at balancing so many things... a Master/slave with the slave wanting to engage in age play and He isn't interested, but they're polyamorous so He encourages her to find a Mommy. I can't wait to get it down and hopefully find a publisher for it.

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  4. Oh, "urge" is the PERFECT verb here--lovely!

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    1. thanks, Emily. yeah, I was very thoughtful on my word choice as I was writing this.

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  5. Very intriguing story line t - pretty sure I know how what happens, but waiting to see what happens afterward.

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  6. I love how varied your writing is, all the different dynamics are so intriguing. I'm totally M/f in my writing, but I love to explore other types of relationships through others' work. Yay! So glad you shared this. I pooped out mid-NaNo in favor of edits and promotions. Good for you.

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    1. thanks, Normandie. Still trying on nano- just got back from my local write-in where I managed to put together a few hundred words in my nano. I do so enjoy writing across gender, sexuality, kink everything :)

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  7. I'm with Normandie. I am strictly M/f in both m y lifestyle and writing, but I can appreciate other lifestyles in others' writing. I'm impressed that you can incorporate so many dynamics in yours. Great snippet!

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    1. thanks, Johnna. I tend to live complexly- I think I just made a not normally made word and I love it :D I like balancing the normally un-balancable :D

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  8. Can't wait to see the spanking! Please, please, pretty please? --Dinah McLeod

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  9. Interesting to use the Mommy/girl dynamic. Haven't we all regretted using our mean voice? :)

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    1. yes, it's one thing if the mean voice was needed, but "Mommy" just stepped next to Joey

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  10. This has me intrigued. I’ll be looking forward to more Joelle :)

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  11. Glad to hear, Constance :) you'll have Mommy and Joey for a few weeks, at least

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  12. I especially liked the mean voice. Good snippet.

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    1. thanks, Cara. yeah, mean voice felt right

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  13. Intriguing snippet, Joelle. I'm looking forward to reading more. In the meantime, keep writing. NaNo is great for getting the juices flowing.

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    1. thanks, Kathryn. I'm still hopeful. I'm breaking nano rules today :D but slowly writing is happening

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  14. You got into the characterization so well. Good luck with this project... there's a place for it - there isn't much age play in available erotic romance.

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    1. thanks, Paloma. yeah, it'll be good to find a place. And every time I share a little bit, it seems that I get reminded not only of age play not being available that much, but specifically the Mommy/little girl that I'm writing is rare

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  15. Nicely drawn scene, Joelle - I really get a sense of the personalities and motivations of Mommy and little, and of course a yummy sense of the painful things to come. I love ageplay :D

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    1. thanks, Penelope. It's been interesting, writing this. I think the fact that I made both the Mommy and little be learning has helped me a bunch.

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