For those who didn't read the 525 word post, let me summarize. "The Five" is the growing story of a poly leather family, growing from just a dom and a sub to a five person family of different genders, orientations, and roles.
Well here's hoping for a virtual spanking for a few too many lines and a real one from my Master sometime this weekend because I'm hopelessly wound and writing has slowed down again :(. Update: told my Master about my joking here... no comments for the headmistress, but His response to His part was to engage in breath play and anal intercourse- said it worked just as good as a spanking at unwinding me, but without 5 mins of spanking tiring His arm out lmao.
Scene set up- After a wanna-be dom loudly dismisses Harlequin for a poorly prepared cup of coffee, Etan swoops in to enjoy the lost little girl and maybe teach her a lesson or two they'll both enjoy. He gets the story from her on when she first learned about BDSM, from sneaking around and finding her mum's copy of Story of O. Here they've moved to a private playroom in the club at which they met.
Up to 8 sentences of spanking fun on a Saturday :) Please make sure to use the links at the bottom to visit my fellow spankers and spankees :D
Enjoy the 8 lines of spanking fun and visit the other spankos :) links below
"When I asked you want you liked of Story of O, you made a comment on the storytelling and then talked about the sex with O masked. What were your thoughts on things like the flogging, paddling, any pain play?"
"It... it..." Harlequin gasped at Etan's large hand settled on her thigh. "The fantasy turned me... on, but I'm not sure, Sir. In real life, Sir."
"Of course." Etan gestured at a near-by table. "Do you see that mask and the other items?"
"Yes, Sir."
"I want to put that mask on you before turning you onto your stomach and watching you experience those various things touching your skin. Then I want to give you a spanking, just a few slaps, unless you're obviously enjoying it. Then I may spank you until you orgasm."
"Yes, Sir." Harlequin's hips moved just so her body hovered above his legs for a moment. She settled back down against him.
Ooh, it does sound like you've made progress between Harlequin and Etan. I want more. Glad your Master was able to unwind you so you can get back to creating. Love the snippet, Joelle.
ReplyDeleteit's going :) as long as I can stop over-thinking :) Harlequin is just too naive- I don't remember being that naive lmao. thanks for the comment
DeleteI like her hesitation, and her fearful anticipation to being spanked.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to finding out how she endured/enjoyed it.
thanks, LA. Me too :D- I can't seem to get past Etan teasing her
DeleteHe can spank me until I orgasm! Nicely done Joelle!
ReplyDeleteHey, when I'm stuck, I walk away from my computer and go into the woods for a walk. It always helps. Good luck.
thanks, Natasha. heh yeah, spank until orgasm. I love that line
DeleteI've been thinking of nabbing a few dollars from my Master's wallet and going to sit in one of the massage chairs at the mall lol
I love the ritualism here, Joelle! This has the makings of a great scene.
ReplyDeletethanks, Emily. I'm having a good time with this. I figure since little Harlequin has so little experience, Etan might as well train her to be exactly what he wants, since there's less competing "what a good sub is" in her head.
DeleteShe's so compliant and eager. He's so much in control.
ReplyDeletethanks, Cara. yeah, it's beautiful :D
DeleteFirst times are always exciting. I know this one will be.
ReplyDeleteyeah :) I think he's a pretty good teacher too :D. thanks
DeleteI enjoy her hesitation about bringing the Life of O from fantasy to reality. Words on paper are so much different than a flogger on the skin. Nicely done, my dear.
ReplyDeletethanks :) I imagine it's like that for many people when they read about BDSM before engaging in it. I think I was rather lucky, in away- my first girlfriend actively taught me various BDSM before I ever read any BDSM erotica
DeleteI love the idea of the mask. So sexy and erotic. Nice job!
ReplyDeletethanks :) the mask was one of the first things that came to me as I was imagining this scene
Deletemmm yummy
ReplyDeletehehe thanks. yes, yummy... ppssttt- Etan is Hebrew meaning "firm and strong" :D
DeleteGreat set-up, Now where is the rest?
ReplyDeleteDon't worry- I'll wait while you fetch it...
Okay- now where is it?
lol, Abbie. Thanks. But really :D while I wasn't working on drunk as I was very unsubmissively angry at my Master, I was working on this WIP and after checking my notifications on fb, I'll be getting to more writing so at the very least there'll be more from it next Saturday Spankings
DeleteThe story of O, a mask, different sensations on her skin and THEN a spanking - a delicious set up. Hope it's as wonderful for her as it sounds like its going to be
ReplyDeletethanks :) I'm sure you'll enjoy the twist and turns I'm taking these characters on :D
DeleteCongratulations on your progress. These characters sound like they'll fire your imagination, sometimes easily and sometimes with challenges. Those are the best characters. Nice segment today.
ReplyDeletethanks, Patricia. Yeah, they're making me think a lot. I've managed characters very unlike me so I'm doing spending time pondering and reflecting
DeleteNice, Joelle. I over think a lot and that frustrates me. I have to stop doing that.
ReplyDeletethanks, Mary. but yeah, easier said then done. Although I'm not quite sure what my problem is here- I know with my other WIP, I'm all anxious because it's DD (albeit poly) and I keep getting worried if I'm doing it right. But this is poly BDSM. I "know" this. Or at least I should.
DeleteSensual and consensual, I like it! Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteand thanks for the comment, Loki. but yeah, as much as I enjoy reading non-con, I'm not very good at writing it lol
DeleteGreat snippet Joelle :) I empathise with you’re funk. There’s nothing worse!
ReplyDeletethanks, Constance :) both on the compliment and empathizing. Sometimes I think I've just spent too much time with Vala lol- it can be a bit of struggle for me to move out of her universe; I think of Emily Tilton with her on-going series :D
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