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Friday, August 2, 2013

#SatSpanks ... To please Him, she will

Because I am a superior brat :D you'll have to wait another week to see Thora get her spanking. Can we, can we please move on to the tawse, Headmistress? Now I'm doing the last edits for my second book in Vala's Story, "Gates of the Garden: Book Two." I was thinking, thinking on spankings and thought of this one. It's maybe 22 pages into the book and Vala's had only her first lesson. The Queen pauses to give her a spanking because he wants to, because he wants her ass red.

8 lines of spanking fun- well cough cough, another reason I need a spanking because I'm pushing it a little to 9 :D Please read the other spankos' blog post. links at the bottom

smirks... bottom  :D


The Queen alternately slapped and squeezed Vala's ass. Pinching where he’d left a dark handprint, he grinned when she arched upward off his lap. "Does it hurt bad yet?"

"Yes, my Queen!" Vala cried and shuddered against The Queen.

Eyes closed for a moment, The Queen groaned. "But you can endure it to please me?"

Vala struggled with sobs and whimpers pouring out of her mouth. "For you, my Queen." She coughed, her tears running down her cheeks.




24 comments:

  1. Vala and the Queen, eh? I'm intrigued, since I associate queen's with being feminine, and this queen does not sound at all feminine. Definitely need to find out more about this one. Thanks for posting, Joelle.

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    1. The Queen earned his mickname as a queer street kid in Manhattan, surviving the best way he knew how until he could get off drugs and get into business. And while his sexuality is fluid he is definitely "all man" :D Him and Vala, yup, they're among my favorites. Well his whole leather family. I just spent more time with them for Camp Nano- The Queen had some fun; he decided he wanted to play with the trope of "slave auditions" because he can afford to :D.
      and you're welcome :) I was quite pleased with myself with I thought of this way to be a tease :D

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  2. The Queen certainly does sound male. Intriguing snippet Joelle :)

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    1. thanks, Constance. Yup, a male. He does enjoy making situations where he's beating and/or having sex with one of his dear slaves :)

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  3. Wow, ok, I will come back tomorrow. Brat!! Loved the teeny tiny teaser snippet Joelle!

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    1. I was so laughing at your comment that my Master wanted to know what was up, Natasha :D. Yeah that you loved the snippet. This was a hard one :D- I debated to which lines to share because The Queen has some really good ones in it. It's not here nor in the snippet tomorrow, but I love his little speech to Vala before he starts the spanking (yum, it's a totally tingly moment)- "I am going to spank you until your ass is very red. You will not try to escape. You would never do that." yum. okay I just got myself worked up with my own writing this morning lmao

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  4. The Queen is male? Okay wow, I've got to read more of this. Nice teaser, Joelle!

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    1. Yup, male. You know, it's interesting, Maren, I've talked with a variety of friends with this. Maybe it's the fact that I came out as bisexual when I was 15 in the metro Detroit area, maybe it was my interactions with the BDSM community slowly at that age even as I grew old enough to get into the "adults only" spaces, but the notion of naming oneself, of that name not being constrained too much by social norms. So he is The Queen, even if people think of that as feminine. He's a complex character- I've long envisioned him as physical a mix of the WWE Undertaker and Trent Resnor while he was still doing heroin.

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  5. Oh, this is rocking my world. A male queen. I need to get out more. Great stuff!

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    1. He's a great guy, a great dom. On Tuesdays you often can see more fiction with him, things I've written outside my series. Of course :D tomorrow you get to see more of this specific scene and have a chance to win a print copy of the first book

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    1. nods... it's not necessarily The Queen's fetish, but he needed to make a few very particular points to Vala here. Pretty sure she won't forget the lesson :D

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  7. Awesomely intriguing, Joelle! I really, really want to learn more about them!

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    1. thanks, Emily :) they're a good leather family. I've been lonesome today for The Queen and all his slaves since I finished my spin-off with them that I wrote for Camp Nano. I love the parts of him that are alpha male as well as those imperfections I've taken the time to write :)

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  8. I really like the dynamic here: the struggle within Vala to be stoical for her Queen whilst she sobs from the pain of the spanking; the arbitrary, almost cold, exercise of power on the part of the Queen that has reduced Vala to such a state. It's like fire and ice.

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    1. thanks, Penelope :) It was a difficult scene to write, but it was what was needed there, to teach Vala just one of many lessons

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  9. Have to admit I was confused by "The Queen." If I'd read it within the context of the story, I suppose I'd get it.

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    1. maybe. I guess I'm so used to queer spaces, people whose sexuality and gender are both fluid that I don't even question. thanks for the comment

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  10. A male queen that is not nice. Yes, you got us, hook, line, and sinker. Brat.

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    1. lol Abbie. yes, I am a brat.
      funny though to look at your phrase "a male queen that is not nice"- well I never think of The Queen as "a queen" but by his full name The Queen, both words capitalized every time. Of course, I also giggle to think of the lovemaking and aftercare that comes a few paragraphs after this.
      but it's just 7 more days and you'll have more Thora, Bruce, and Arya

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  11. The Queen is a male...mmm. Fancy that;) Hot snippet.

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    1. thanks, Mary. yeah :D he's a he lol

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  12. "The Queen" threw me for a moment. I had to go back and read it twice...which is not necessarily a bad thing. I got a lot more out of it the second time. Interesting!

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    1. that's wonderful, even just in the snippet you got more on a second read :) Admittedly he's good for that, throwing people. I think to the dom on whom he was based first, sometimes called Tarantula. I don't live in a world of "normal" names :D

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