Up to 8 sentences of spanking fun on a Saturday :) Please make sure to use the links at the bottom to visit my fellow spankers and spankees :D
Maybe I need to buy a pretty brush? my Master has this "beater stick" as He calls it, and it's okay, and He's even taught me to like it okay- I used to hate it- but I think a pretty paddle brush like what Bruce uses on Thora would be nicer.
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How will you do this? Arya licked her lips.
Maybe I need to buy a pretty brush? my Master has this "beater stick" as He calls it, and it's okay, and He's even taught me to like it okay- I used to hate it- but I think a pretty paddle brush like what Bruce uses on Thora would be nicer.
\How will you do this? Arya licked her lips.
Bruce whacked Thora's ass with quick strokes, moving from one cheek and back to the other.
Thora sighed. "Thank you."
Maintenance equals five each cheek for them.
Maintenance equals five each cheek for them.
Bruce rubbed Thora's punished skin. "Turn onto your back, sweet."
Ahh, Thora is clearly enjoying the spanking Bruce is giving her, but I'm confused as to the relationship between the three. Intriguing snippet, Joelle.
ReplyDeleteyeah, that was hard, Kathryn. There wasn't much in the part that shows what happens that's good for a Saturday Spankings. I may just need to share a little bit of the beginning on another day maybe. I forget if I asked in the first snippet from "Looking for our Unicorn"- are you familiar with the term "unicorn" as we use it in the polyamorous community? If not, a unicorn is most often that bisexual woman that a polyamorous couple is hoping to find to become a polyamorous triad. "She" is a unicorn in part because there are many more couples looking than bisexual females who want it.
DeleteJoelle, if you want more comments I suggest you lift your captcha code restriction on Saturdays.
ReplyDeleteack, I didn't even realize I had on one. I'll have to remove that right away :) thanks for mentioning
DeleteI agree about the captcha. Last week it took me several tries to get through.
ReplyDeletePretty or not, implements still hurt!
icky captcha :(
Deletewell yes, pretty or not :D but at least it's something nice to imagine while you're getting your strokes :D
Yes all implements do hurt, but there is something nice about a pretty one.
ReplyDeletemy Master's beater stick? it's a totally uninspiring black piece of scariness. Although this is only the first spanking I've written Bruce giving so I'm not sure his thoughts on implements yet :D
DeleteI too like the thought of a pretty paddle, as long as it's not being applied to my own buttocks. ~smirks~
ReplyDeleteNice little tease, Joelle, but where's the link to buy the book?
hehe not applied... sorry LA, you must have missed the beggining of this- I've shared a few snippets... "Looking for our Unicorn" is just a WIP at the moment. I'd felt the need to share it with you all on the hop. This is my first serious adventure with something not BDSM and I've been anxious if what I was producing was any good at all
DeletePretty? I think only my mister thinks an implement is pretty- I add pretty to awful occasionally.
ReplyDeletePretty=awful
pretty awful
pretty dreadful
pretty rotten
lol Abbie. idk if it's I'm a writer, just that of a masochist or what, but I can look at an implement, even one that's been used on me and think "Yes, that's a pretty flogger/paddle/what-have-you"
Deleteyeah, I figured out turning of the captcha! :)
ReplyDeleteI have a think for maintenance! Lovely, Joelle!
ReplyDeleteyeah, I know, I do too, Natasha. thanks. but yeah, my poor Master- "How would maintenance spankings be any different than what we already do?" :D
DeleteHaving her roll toward TWO people was a nice little surprise.
ReplyDeleteyeah :) thanks... I don't believe I quite showed the position she's in in my other two snippets from this WIP. At least I have one more snippet lined up from it for you all :)
DeleteI do love a good maintenance spanking. Thanks for sharing, Joelle.
ReplyDeleteand thanks for the comment, Breanna. yeah, they're good. I'm still grateful the conversation around them in my household, my Master took it as a request for just "more" although part of me still thinks, last week's, Thora's ritual... sometimes I miss the ritual of things and my Master so isn't into ritual
DeleteIs this a WIP or is it published already. I can't find a link or a title. I need to know more about the triad. I love the unique names and am intrigued. Tell me more...
ReplyDeletesorry, Maddie. I didn't think about people who haven't caught it before in Saturday Spankings. Yes, this is a WIP. I need to make time in my writing schedule to get back to it. Cara Bristol had suggested I write a polyamorous spanking story when I asked if there are any already published. And I have this started, just a bit over 2600 words. I'd stopped in part because I doubted my own writing. I primarily write very hard core BDSM- I'm not entirely sure I can even dial it back. I hope to write some more, get a rough draft, then see about getting a BR or two among all your spanking/DD writers before I try shopping it to a publisher
Deleteoh and the working title is "Looking for our Unicorn"- going with the polyamorous trope of "finding the mythical bisexual female who wants to become a triad with a male/female couple"
DeleteHot tease Joelle. I’m really looking forward to seeing where this goes next :)
ReplyDeletethanks :) Well I have the WIP open on my computer to work on eventually today. I realized, I'm struggling with Bruce
DeleteThe dynamic has me curious. More, please. :)
ReplyDelete:) I'm working on it :) I have this crazy idea- for me- to try a rough outline to get me going on writing.
DeleteThere is something really naughtily hot about the thought of being spanked when someone else is looking on, and then to lie between the two... I really want to know what happens next.
ReplyDeletewell it's building- while it's been slow writing today, it's happening- I've gone from being stuck at 2647 words to over 3100. I'm just struggling a bit to write sex that's a big more vanilla. IDK. maybe I'll manage a novella? Once I get a rough draft done, I'll be looking for DD readers willing to beta on a poly DD story :)
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