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Friday, December 6, 2013

#SatSpanks ... Little girls sometimes need cuddles

8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.

Isn't it just so unfair when the dom wants the sub to explain aloud what he/she/ze did wrong? And of course since I'm writing Mommy/little girl age play, that had to figure into my spanking scene :D. If you'd like first check out these snippets: where Joey earns her spanking and then Mommy and Joey getting into position for the spanking.

But here, Joey is forced to speak; Mommy wants to know her little girl knows what she did wrong.
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"I think you know why you were so rude to me. I want to hear you say it."

I chewed on my bottom lip, trying to put together the words. "I..." I fell silent. "I'm just anxious with Master and His swing shift and um the slide," I babbled, mumbled.

"Maybe you should have asked for more help? Or maybe some cuddles?"

I felt the first tear drop roll down my cheek. "Yes, Mommy, I should've asked."

27 comments:

  1. Cuddles always help. (and spanks) :) Great snippet

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  2. Her manner does make her sound like a little girl. I can picture the scene clearly. Nicely done.

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    1. thanks, Cara :) I'm glad others are seeing what I wanted to lay out so well

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  3. You capture the feelings of each of your characters so well. And it is hard to verbalize what you've done wrong at any age.

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    1. very true, PK. What I want and what I've done wrong are both big struggles for me with my Master. thanks for the comment :)

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  4. I've been looking forward to a snippet from your age-play Joelle. From the excerpt it looks as though this is written in 1st person? ~grins~
    There is so much more I want to know. I'll be checking out some of those links to other snippets.
    Lovely tease ヅ ツ ッ

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    1. yup, 1st person, LA. thanks for the comment, good to know you were looking forward to it. I have a few more snippets planned, for both this and the Seductive Studs and Sirens blog hops. I need to do some work on Vala's Story, but I hope to be getting back to "Mommy" after that and maybe have some more snippets to share, although they'll likely be out of order :D

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    2. btw, you've read some of my other posts on age play, right? the more academic ones? :D

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  5. What a lovely way to bring in authentic affection--"cuddles" evokes so many wonderful emotions.

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    1. thanks, Emily :) yeah, cuddles is a nice word.

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  6. Aw, it is always so difficult to admit your wrongdoing. Very nice.

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  7. thanks, Leigh. yeah. especially thinking back to the scenario I built for how she earned the spanking :D When she snapped "no" was such a moment in writing :D

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  8. Ooh, it's even harder to say why you've done something wrong. Joey definitely needs cuddles.

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    1. thanks, Johnna. It'll be great when I finish this and get it published for you all to read :D yup, cuddles are important through out the book :)

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  9. Asking for cuddles is nearly always a good thing to do. Fictional mommies are particularly good with those. :)

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    1. thanks for the comment, Patricia. Yup, Mara's a good cuddler :D

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  10. I love the way these two characters interact. Cuddles is indeed the perfect word. It conveys much more than a simple hug. Love the snippet, Joelle.

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    1. thanks, Kathryn. Definitely wanted a bigger picture than a hug. To me, cuddles when talking two adults, means one partner on the lap of the other. Good for AP :)

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  11. Some people are not very good at asking for what they want. It's always good when they have a mommy or daddy who knows what they need.

    Love these snippets. Keep 'em comin'!

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    1. thanks, Normandie. well poor Joey is dealing with her Master's swing shift, so yes, they agreed she needed a mommy :D

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  12. Very nice, cuddles go a long way to making a little girl feel better.

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  13. Aw. Poor girl. I hope Mommy isn't too strict with her.

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    1. thanks, Angie :) no, I don't think I wrote Mommy too strict, although she is definitely teaching a lesson. I mean, what good is it for Mommy to come visit to help with Master's shift change if Joey's not going to say she needs help?

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  14. LOVE LOVE. Yes, indeed, she SHOULD have asked! :P

    <3 ageplay

    Bella x

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    1. thanks for the comment, Bella. yeah, it's a good line :)

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