8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.
So I was struggling with what to do a snippet from for this week- still too much IRL stress :( - and I thought of "Skipping Down the Primrose Path: Book Three." It's the 3rd book in my Vala's Story serial; it needs some re-writing before it returns to my BR and hopefully is ready to go on to my editor. Vala (because she likes talking directly to my readers) announces early in the book that she's changing the style her and her ghost writer have been using so far in the telling of her story. In a moment of "I want to show something going on in The Queen's world that didn't directly affect me," Vala shared pointed out a spanking that turned her on in the hearing of what happened.
Scene set-up: In "Gates of the Garden: Book Two" Prisca screws up royally (be watching for announcement on release of the book so you can read her screw up and parts of The Queen's punishment). He's forced her to stammer her way through why she ignored his summons and now he's "resetting the relationship." While it might not look like it, this is his equivalent of the DD/spanking romance where the HoH cuddles the TiH after a spanking.
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The Queen pulled Prisca onto his lap and
playfully kissed her neck. He flipped her onto her stomach, on his
lap. He yanked her girlish white panties to her ankles before
smacking her ass hard.
Prisca moaned questioningly.
"Don't ever avoid me again! Do it
and I'll chain you to my ankles!" The Queen smacked Prisca's ass
several more times.
"Ye... yes... my... my Queen," Prisca whimpered, her little white night shirt falling towards her head, her nipples brushing against his legs and growing hard.
"Ye... yes... my... my Queen," Prisca whimpered, her little white night shirt falling towards her head, her nipples brushing against his legs and growing hard.
Chained to ankles, that would be difficult.
ReplyDeletelol yes, for both of them. in my serial, I do actually use a "chained to ankle" once, but it's just his one ankle, making it only really difficult for the sub in question :D
DeleteLove the little white night shirt details Joelle. Those little notes make such a difference in a scene.
ReplyDeletethanks, Natasha. In the over-all building of Prisca's character, those little details are even more important in context :)
DeleteThere's something so very endearing about white panties. I have a feeling Prisca might enjoy being chained to his ankles ... :)
ReplyDeletelol, thanks for the comment, Abigail. but yeah, to be close to The Queen constantly like that? Prisca's infatuation with bondage is almost as great as The Queen's :D
DeleteI've said it before, and I'll say it again--I think the Queen is a genius character.
ReplyDeletethanks, Emily. The Queen and I appreciate the comment :) it was funny though- it didn't come to me until I was writing the intro for this, just how much he was about comforting in this position (pun possibly intended lol)
DeleteI'm with the others, I love the little white panties and down and being chained - nice picture in my head.
ReplyDeletethanks, PK. Don't forgot the matching nightshirt that Prisca put on :D
DeleteChained to the ankles - an interesting position to be put in! Lovely details to the spanking.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Jaye- just wait for the "chained to the ankle" that I teased about to an earlier commentor- I think it's maybe the next book in the serial :D
DeleteHer nipples brushed his leg, I like that part. I'm looking forward to her being chained to his ankle;)
ReplyDeletethanks, Mary. it is a nice scene definitely. I can't wait to get into the re-write of this book for sure (there's still my AP story from nanowrimo to finish though)
DeleteI love the intensity. Count me in with loving the chains to the ankles!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment :) The Queen does tend to be intense. aww I'm glad you like the chaining idea too
DeleteVery detailed... very sexy!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment :) I do love my details :)
Deletemmm, love his dominance.
ReplyDeletethanks, Renee- so in other words :D I should show more of The Queen soon? I was debating more from this book, as I'm working on it, for Satspanks :D
DeleteBeing chained to his ankle. Hmm. Now that is very interesting. The picture that came to mind was a very short chain/tie/leash around her neck and being made to follow as well as keep up. Very interesting Joelle ヅ ツ ッ
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, LA :D that's exactly what I was picturing, having to follow him very closely :D
DeleteThe world sounds very intriguing, nice snippet :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Jill :) it's a story world I love, probably a large part of why I've ended up with a serial and a growing number of spinoffs
DeleteWhite panties rock! Thanks for the lovely snippet!
ReplyDeleteand white camis! I loved putting Prisca in both, thanks for the comment, Angie
DeleteYour world with The Queen is really different, Joelle. I'd be interested in seeing more. Prisca appears to revel in his attention, so I know he's doing something right. Intriguing snippet.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Kathryn :) He is a good dom :) I'm trying to get ready for the re-release of my first book from Vala's Story, the serial that The Queen is in, but if you go to my "My Books" page, you can click on the link for my free ebook, where you get some longer excerpts with him and a few of his slaves as well as other erotica of mine. But yup :D as with anything I share on SatSpanks :D- it's definitely not strictly m/f, but all over the place
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