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Friday, December 20, 2013

#SatSpanks ... What will Master think of Joey and Mommy?

8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.

Lalalalala.... no, I'm not getting ready for Christmas, although I've been enjoying Anastasia Vitsky's Advent Calendar- how about you?

So today I'm sharing the last of the snippets from my Nanowrimo project "Mommy." If you haven't been keeping up, enjoy the snippets in this order: Joey earns her spanking; Mommy and Joey go to the guest room; Mommy makes Joey talk about why she's being spanked; the spanking finally happens. Now at the very end of the scene, after Joey has gotten her cuddles from Mommy, Master surprises them, having woken up without them knowing it.

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"Did she do something to warrant a paddling? I'm still not entirely sure how these things work in AP." Master crossed the room to stand in front of us.

"Very rudely, with no actual provocation from me, she yelled no at me." Mommy's frown sounded in her voice. "And just because I stepped beside her as she was finishing putting away the ingredients we'd bought for dessert tonight. But I reminded her how to be a good girl."

"Joey girl, remember that I hoped Mara's visit would help you deal with me switching over to midnights. See that it does."

"Yes, Master." I closed my eyes again and basked in the similar yet different embraces of Master and Mommy.
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Master works swing shifts and Mommy's come to visit Joey when he's making the change from day shift to midnight shift.

16 comments:

  1. ooh, a master and a mommy-- she's a lucky girl!

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    1. isn't she? thanks for the comment... hopefully i finish this soon :D

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  2. That would be hard work balancing your emotions. Great snippet Joelle :)

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    1. thanks, Constance. I've found balancing emotions to almost be a plot of its own as I've been writing

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  3. That's a nice excerpt Joelle. It's very tender.

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    1. thanks, Natasha :) I like my fictional doms to be more human, less alpha, and I think I managed that decently here with Andrew

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  4. I love this set-up, Joelle--the different dynamics coming together is wonderful

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    1. thanks, Emily. well we all wear different "hats" especially when talking about polyamorous relationships; I thought having the different BDSM roles would make it more interesting

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  5. Very sweet - love how you are bringing them all together.

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    1. thanks, Leigh.it was a nice scene to write

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  6. It could be confusing at first, but it surely covers all the basis.

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    1. thanks for the comment, PK. yeah, confusing. I think that works well with the ageplay part of the story, that it's all about learning :)

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  7. The dynamic here is complex. I like the way you're showing, not telling. Good work!

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  8. I agree with what the others before me have said. There are two very different dynamics at work here, and when both Mommy and Master are in the room together, I'd think Joey might have some difficulty pleasing them both. Although, it appears that her Master is willing to learn what age-play requires. Great development, Joelle. I'd like to read more.

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    1. thanks, Kathryn. Those various balances are certainly something I'm thinking on as I write.

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