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Friday, July 19, 2013

#SatSpanks "Master, i'm lubing up for you"


Last week, remember last Saturday?, I took part in the Saturday Spankings blog hop the first time and managed to get my name on Mistress Blake's paddle for being tardy- aren't I a rotten brat? So I realized, in reading the rules, I skipped one: Post your sentences so they go live by 00:00 on Saturday, but no earlier than 21:00 on Friday (ET). If your post is not live by midnight Saturday, you risk deletion from the list. So this week, I'm scheduling the lines to go live at 11:59 PM ET Friday. Good thing my Master has the Saturday through Monday to take care of me, huh? :D

But yes, so "Ode to Finding my Inner Brat" started off as a joke last week, however I've gotten writing. It's sitting open on my computer as a 736 word file. I started off with a text message conversation that I joked with my Master would be fun to pull on Him one of these days. It's 12 sentences long (including 4 "time stamps") and is only the prelude to the smacks that happen in these lines. I'm not sure where I'm going with it- I might very well end up with a "Tuesday Fiction" blog sharing (so you may very well get to read the whole thing that's most definitely going to go past the allowances of the blog hop :D .

Suddenly my fingers are pulled out of my ass. You push the wrist against the small of my back. Without a word, You deliver a harsh smack to my ass. The smacks fall as I writhe against the bed, glad that You don't want me to count or thank, just feel the smacks.

"Couldn't wait until I got home?"

I turn my head to the side. "Sorry, Master. Woke up... so aroused."

Several more smacks to my ass- I might even have marks when You're done.


28 comments:

  1. Intriguing snippet, Joelle, and you'll be pleased to note that your timing was perfect for your post, so Mistress Blake will have no reason to put you on the tardy board this week. Your master should be proud of you, even if you are occasionally bratty, since I'm sure you'd never be that way with him. Right?

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    1. thanks :) well I told Him the title as He was walking out the door to work hehe so hopefully He'll make up for me being absent from the paddle lmao

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    1. thanks :) now I just have to wake up at 5:50 some morning so I can send Him the texts that started this scene :D

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  3. Do I note some disappointment for not making the tardy board this week?

    Will look forward to seeing where you're going with this writing. Good luck!

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    1. maybe a little disappointment, although one never knows... after the warmachine tournament I may find Him in a mood... that leads to my spanking :D
      and thanks... I need to finish the current sex scene in it and then see where I'm going. the text conversation was fun to write

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  4. I normally have a hard time with first person but this really works. I just read Tara Finnegan's also in first person and that too worked. I'm curious for more Joelle. A continuation of this scene please. Or maybe the start of it.

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    1. I understand, Natasha. I'm picky about my first person too. With these pieces though, I've worked the style since my Master first collared me, a mixture of what's happened and what could very well happen.

      I can't wait to get to reading Tara's then :)

      Well as far as a continuation, it will happen. I just gotta finish writing, or progress further to see if it's just a short thing I have in me that could easily go across 2 blog posts. The promo(s) for it, as long as the admins on the spanking group don't mind, will go there as well as onto my timeline because well, I don't have very much separation at all between "Joelle the author" and "Joelle the person" :D

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  5. Great snippet Joelle. I’d likle to read more too :)

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    1. thanks ;) I'm looking forward to writing more.

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  6. I too would love to see more. I find your writing style refreshingly different. It makes the reader feel part of the scene. Almost voyeuristic.

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    1. thanks :) Interesting, "reader part of the scene"- and here I sit with edits on my second book telling me that I should talk about things like penis and breast size :D I'm glad you enjoyed it. "refreshingly different"- I do love and appreciate the complement

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  7. A steamy snippet and like many of the others here leaving me wanting more too... ✥

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  8. Hot snippet. I know some people don't like the first person, but I always have. It creates such immediacy, such intimacy with the character.

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    1. yes, Cara, that immediacy is such a wonderful thing when the author uses 1st person well. I always try to keep that in mind

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  9. Everything I write is in first person, pretty much. I enjoyed the snippet, hope you keep participating.

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    1. thanks :) I believe I have a plan for next week, but we'll have to see :D

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  10. Keep at it Joelle. This snippet was very engaging. :)

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    1. thanks :) here's hoping. tomorrow to work more on this WIP, then Tuesday to see maybe half or so of it on my blog :D

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  11. That's a naughty, naughty girl who can't wait for her Master to get home. ;)

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    1. yup and I just finished the promised WIP the lines are from 1142 words going onto my blog for tomorrow :) not sure if I have any more "Ode to Finding my Inner Brat" coming to me though :D

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