So I'm bending over my armchair waiting for the spanking; in my defense, I will say that there's several short sentences and it's only 9. :D I went out with my Master and managed to move beyond where I was stuck in "Mommy." Here's a threatening snippet- will Joey be good and just get cuddles?
I
started to shove my crayons into the pretty music notes box she'd got
me at the store.
"No,
no, Joey," Mommy scolded. "Put your crayons away nice so
they last longer."
"Yes,
Mommy." I stuck out my bottom lip.
"Do
you want a spanking before your nap?"
"No,
Mommy. I'm good." I slowed down putting away my crayons so her
frowny face would go back to smiling.
Nice snippet Joelle, love 'so her frowny face would go back to smiling'.
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Roz
thanks for the comment, Roz :)
DeleteI'm afraid I wouldn't do well as a little - I'm grown and would still be cramming my crayons in just any old way.
ReplyDeletelol PK- it'd only be the function of pleasing the Big for me that I would put the crayons in neatly.
DeleteAwww! Cute snippet Joelle! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment, Meredith :) I hope you enjoy the whole scene :D
DeleteNothing more bratty than a pouty lower lip, the image is clear in my mind. Cute snippet, Joelle.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Maddie :) Yup, completely brattie :D
DeleteI recognize that look. Very nice and true to life.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Leigh. Funny thing- my teen bopped his head quick to look- "Hey! You know you're not old enough to read my writing!"- and he set in to argue, "Why would you want a spanking before a nap?" Snorts, I told him to go away :D
DeleteAww. Her frowny face - you've really gotten into the head of a little. Wonderful job!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Normandie :) It's happening wonderfully, although teen is tired of "My Little Pony" playing on the living room tv :D
Deleteso cute!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Renee
DeleteGreat snippet, well done!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Lucy
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