I've been focusing the last few days on "Mommy"- remember "Mommy"? The BDSM/ageplay menage where Josephine the slave goes to her Master and says "Master, could I please have a Mommy?" Mommy has come to visit Andrew and Josephine. She takes Joey and her new dog Rex to the dog park and Joey doesn't remember to act like Josephine.
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Mommy
closed the door; Rex had gone to sleep in his bed in Master's
bedroom. She turned on the classical music station.
I
waited and watched Mommy's preparations.
She
straightened the daybed's comforter before moving to the book shelf.
She pulled the thick wooden ruler from its spot.
The
gasp escaped my parted lips.
Mommy
pursed her lips at me. "It seems you've earned yourself another
spanking for not behaving in a ladylike manner, especially when you
shouldn't have been behaving as a little in the first place."
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Okay, I couldn't help myself with the tease. Yes, I'm only leading up to the spanking here :D. I could only share 8 sentences after all :D. Come back on Wednesday for #WIPiTuP where I'll share so much more of the scene.
You couldn't help yourself, huh. I think Mommy should take care of this little teaser.
ReplyDeleteLOL couldn't help myself at all, Leigh :D I know, I need a spanking... although after telling my Master a little bit about writing Joey's corner time and how I dislike the notion of corner time, He was saying it sounded like a fine punishment for me, ACK! hehe thanks for the comment.
DeleteYour Master is one lucky man, Ms. Casteel. :) Cute, very cute.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Maggie :) LOL I'm not sure He'd always agree- it's not easy being in love with someone who's bipolar.
DeleteJoelle you are a tease! Great snippet :)
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Roz
I know, aren't I? :D thanks for the comment, Roz
DeleteOoh, rulers can make a point very nicely. I think the butterflies of dread have surely begun to fill her stomach. I like this. There aren't enough F/f books out there. Thanks for developing this relationship.
ReplyDeleteI'd only had Mommy give hand spankings so far and since she's punishing Joey for a repeat offense, I felt I needed to up things. I've enjoyed a lot of things with this book that's different. All the F/f stuff, especially that it's a Mommy and a little girl. Then the fact that the dominant is a shift worker. My poor Master lol, He'd said something about "Do you know how it feels to work so many days in a row with no break?"- He's in the midst of an overtime string to show up Andrew, and I started to explain about my shift worker dom in this book. :D my Master asked if I was trying to tell Him that I wasn't doing okay. "Nope, not about me, Master," I said, even if He's working straight through until Christmas day currently. Thanks for the comment, Jolynn
DeleteThis was great and I'm happy to know I can read more Wednesday. Looks like she's getting it from all sides - and really, what could be better?
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, PK. It was interesting as I went over what came after this punishment scene to add in details that would be caused by it. You know, trying to balance two although different dominants for one sub has actually been the trickiest thing in this book
DeleteLove the careful preparations - the closed door, the classical music, all adding to the anticipation.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Tara. Yes, the preparations :) I love them too
ReplyDeleteSure Joelle, keeps us waiting. Nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteheh thanks for the comment, Mary :D I'm a special kind of brat, i know :D
DeleteOh, lovely ladylike-ness, and the lack thereof. :D
ReplyDeleteyup lol, Emily. I promise there's at least one line in the longer piece I'm sharing on Wednesday that you'll just love :D thanks for the comment
DeleteYummy spanking snippet, well done!
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Lucy :)
DeleteMmm, great tease. And I love a thick ruler...
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Renee :) It strikes me that I didn't describe the ruler at all... good thing this is still an active WIP :D
DeleteAfter reading your article I was amazed. I know that you explain it very well. And I hope that other readers will also experience how I feel after reading your article. BDSM
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