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I ended up deciding to share from "Mommy"- my BDSM/ageplay menage WIP. I'd been talking with Meredith O'Reily and she was interested when I used the phrase "online flirtation" to explain what I was working on in the WIP so I decided to share it. Quick explanation: also well into the story, Andrew (the dominant) rescues Rex (a mostly wolfhound mutt) for Joey (the submissive/little girl.) Here they're talking online with Mara/maralady (Joey's Mommy). For the ease of reading online, I've put the narrative parts in italics and color-coded the chat names; I'm so glad I'm looking to submit this to a publisher, who'll get to make formatting choices instead of me having to decide what works in an ebook :D.
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Rex happily rested his head on my feet as I leaned back in my chair.
I watched Master fire up his computer as I did the same.
I giggled as messenger made its logged in noise on both Master's and
my computers.
maralady: hey you both! I didn't expect to see you online today.
MasterAndrew: well there's a little girl that's been missing you and
me too :D
maralady: really? we're gonna flirt in front of our little girl? hi
joey btw
andrewsgirl: hi Mommy. well it's not like you and Master were kissing
or anything lol. ooo and you're including Master? i'm His little girl
too?
maralady: LOL I can only imagine the glares you must be getting at
this moment, joey
I looked up from my computer at Master; He did have quite a glower
going. "Just joking, Master?"
Master snorted His laughter. "You are pushing it, little girl."
"I'll be good, Master." I batted my eyelashes cutely.
maralady: are you both taking a moment for joey to get punished for
being mouthy?
MasterAndrew: just a warning for her. no punishment just yet.
although I don't quite mind the little girl joke
andrewsgirl: it's not like I called You Daddy, Master
maralady: ROFLMAO! joey girl, why don't you behave, my sweet?
andrewsgirl: yes, Mommy. I'll stop teasing Master so
MasterAndrew: yup, I think she just earned herself a punishment. what
do you think, mara?
maralady: hm. well I hoped for a bit of flirting here maybe, with
joey behaving.... but what about a brush spanking at bedtime? Or does
that walk a little too close to AP for your comfort, Andrew?
Master laughed out loud.
MasterAndrew: nah, that sounds good. maybe that'll get her ready for
when you can visit us?
maralady: flirt :D
MasterAndrew: damn right. I wanna see you enjoy my little girl
I whimpered and pressed my hands to my hot cheeks.
maralady: did you just make joey blush?
MasterAndrew: yup lol
andrewsgirl: i'm okay now
Master threw back His head in laughter.
maralady: hm. no title... who could that have been directed at, joey
girl?
andrewsgirl: uh, sorry, Mommy. I should have typed *i'm okay now,
Mommy and Master* although Master could see my blush fading away
until He started laughing
maralady: so how've you been doing settling with with rex?
andrewsgirl: we took him on a walk, Mommy! it was so fun. and Master
was extra sweet and brought me my ballet flats and hoodie, since I'd
changed into a tank top and shorts once we got home from church.
maralady: that was very nice of Andrew.... and so you bratted at him?
I clapped my hand over my mouth.
MasterAndrew: I don't think that was the response joey was expecting
from you :D
maralady: heh well her role in our AP hasn't been a very bratty one,
so I wondered about the bratting directed at you
MasterAndrew: I think sometimes she's trying to figure out just how
much my comfort with AP might be changing. She did seek permission
for the profile you read largely because AP wasn't something I felt
comfortable doing, you know, like some of the doms who are
comfortable with being a few dom types
maralady: I guess then the question is if you are getting more
comfortable in observing joey and I playing or if your squick factor
for her playing at you as a little is lessening. Can she brat without
it being as a disobedient slave?
Master studied me for a moment; I lowered my eyelids slightly under
His examination. "Have we been together so long that you're
starting to brat, to change your tendencies as a submissive?"
"Um... maybe, Master. I'm sorry if that displeases You, Master."
I rapidly blinked my eyes.
"No, you aren't in trouble beyond that hair brush spanking that
Mara and I were talking about. I think I like a little bratting
actually sometimes, but you should have taken my expression as time
to stop bratting."
"Yes, Master." What had gotten into me?
MasterAndrew: okay we're back. I think we can chalk it up to "we're
all learning." We've never been high protocol anyway. maybe
you're helping her to continue the process of moving away from the
"perfect mormon girl" behavior she can get into sometimes,
without even meaning to. but she failed to react to my expression as
she would have normally
maralady: have you seen yet how rex deals with any intimacy between
you two? some dogs can be quite funny about that
I giggled. When Rex looked up at me, I giggled harder.
Master laughed as he typed.
MasterAndrew: nope, we haven't seen yet. Have to see how he deals
with her spanking- since he has most definitely claimed her
maralady: that is so sweet.
maralady: what are you wearing right now, joey?
andrewsgirl: just a nighty, in case Rex wants me to go in the
backyard with him, Mommy
maralady: describe it
Master made a low pitched whistling noise, making me blush.
"But You saw me put it on, Master," I whined.
Master arched one eyebrow at me.
MasterAndrew: Joey just made the ugliest whining at me whistling at
her
maralady: tut tut, little girl.
andrewsgirl: sorry, Mommy.
Master cleared His throat.
"I'm sorry, Master. I shouldn't have whined at Your flirtatious
whistle, Master."
Master nodded. "And?"
andrewsgirl: it's a white cotton nightie, going to my knees, flowy
and loose, Mommy. it has little roses sewn randomly. It have pretty
red lace to match the roses, at the neck and bottom and to make the
straps.
maralady: good girl. do you just have on the nightie?
I couldn't hold in my giggles.
andrewsgirl: just the night, no panties, Mommy
Master grabbed His camera. "Lift your nightie and spread your
legs!"
I obeyed without thought only to have the flash of Master's camera go
off.
Master pushed a few buttons.
MasterAndrew: there you go, sweet
maralady: why thank you for the pic :D