If you look in my right hand margin, you'll see my "How I see things" blurb. It's a bit edited and reorganized from the blurb I did have several weeks at the beginning of my Saturday Spankings' posts.
Thanks to Love Spanks relaxing the word limit rule, we're farther along in this scene then I expected :D. If you want a refresh first, here's the 1st snippet, here's two weeks (which is longer thanks to Love Spanks), and then last week is here.
Scene set up: The Queen and Prince Synn arrived at the pool area in The Queen's mansion to find Raanan and his submissive Gaelan doing something sexual under the water. Thanks to Love Spanks, the section of the scene where Prince Synn and Gaelan were able to settle in to watch the show in one large snippet. I shared in the comments' section of last week that I'd been doing some editing on this scene and in this snippet, you get to see some of the fruits of that rewrite.
"What were you and Gaelan doing when we arrived?" The Queen popped each of Raanan's calves with the flogger.
"Just... swimming... my... Queen." Raanan panted between each word.
"Just swimming?" The Queen asked as he flogged Raanan's back. "I think you were also enjoying your boy."
"Yes, my Queen. Thanks for such a... good boy, my Queen." Raanan awkwardly turned left when that side of the pool ended.