8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.
After having Patty Devlin call me a "wretched tease" last week, I decided I'd continue from last week's snippet. The Queen wakes Vala in childish excitement on the morning of a ceremony day and then I skipped ahead to Iona's promotion ceremony- yes, his slaves get spankings as part of their promotion to a higher level in his hierarchy :D . And yes, you're still enjoying snippets for the in-progress "Skipping Down the Primrose Path: Book Three"- I'm hoping to get "Mommy" done so BR and I can get back to work on "Skipping." After this led up, next week I'll be sharing Iona's spanking :D. And btw- it is The Queen speaking in the beginning.
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Iona dropped her slaves' leashes to the
floor. She scurried to the paddling bench and draped herself over it.
"Greta and Vala, crawl to the
paddling bench. Kneel before your Lady and take one of her hands in
yours."
Vala and Greta crawled to the paddling
bench so they faced Iona. They moved apart and each took hold of one
of Iona's hands.
Vala kissed Iona's hand. "I love
you, my Lady."
"I love you, my Lady." Greta
kissed Iona's hand.
I can picture this so vividly, Joelle. I imagine Greta and Vala watching Iona's face, feeling the tension in her hands as the blows are delivered.
ReplyDeleteVery creative! :-)
thanks, LA. I had a feeling you all would enjoy this moment with the girls :) I loved working with the girls' within The Queen's ceremony.
DeleteOMG, that was super hot Joelle. I love the turn around. Love it!!
ReplyDeletethanks, Natasha :) just one more week until Iona gets her 2 whacks :D
DeleteVery hot Joelle, loved it! I can feel the build up and anticipation in this piece.
ReplyDeletethanks, Roz :) glad you enjoyed it too... oh the things we can do with 8 sentences :D
DeleteGreat snippet, Joelle, you wretched tease you. Heh. :)
ReplyDeletelol Sheri :D next week, next week :D and if you go over to my Seductive Studs and Siren's post, you can enjoy the girls making love
DeleteYou were compelled to continue this scene because you were called a"wretched tease". I'm going to have to think of something worse to keep you going. Great snippet.
ReplyDeletehehe PK. thanks for the comment. Well there isn't much beyond Iona's paddling in this scene.... I'll have to continue along in the WIP for the next spanking scene. I'm not sure who "gets it" next, as Iona's promotion is the last of the ceremonies before the party starts.
DeleteYou are certainly piquing(sp) our interest. Very good job.
ReplyDeletethanks, Leigh :)
DeleteNice build up and shows affection between the girls.
ReplyDeletethanks, Helen. the girls are good in this scene :)
DeleteHot snippet ... the girls are obviously devoted to their Queen :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Abigail. well The Queen is a really good dom :) I think many subs would be happy to serve him
Delete*whew* Joelle, very vivid for the imagination and hot!
ReplyDeletethanks, Mary. glad you enjoyed it :D
DeleteHawt! I guess maybe I should razz people a little more often? Yes, they can all jsut thank me now...
ReplyDeleteso after next week and Iona getting her paddling, I should find something less interesting? :D just kidding, Patty. I actually gotta ponder on where I'm going next, but it should be good lol thanks for the comment hehe
DeleteI love the love and support that Vala and Greta are showing Iona. Lovely snippet Joelle :)
ReplyDeletethanks, Constance. I so enjoyed when I thought of the girls' place in the ceremony
DeleteI loved the devotion shown and will join others in the call for you to continue.
ReplyDeleteah thanks for the comment, Jolynn :) and again I say, next week :D
DeleteToo many teases this week I'm ready to scream. ;) lol
ReplyDeletelol Suzy :D You'll make it :D because next week is the spanking :D
DeleteI love the leashes!
ReplyDeletethanks, Renee :) I love, at the beginning of the ceremonies (where I didn't snippet), The Queen asks Simon "Did you get all the needed leashes?" and Simon replies, grinning, "Of course, my Queen. It's ceremony day." :D
DeleteCeremony Day, where a paddling accompanies a promotion. The girls are clearly devoted to their lady, and she didn't hesitate for a second before taking her "exalted" position on the bench. Looks like everyone present is quite pleased by this turn of events, but I wonder if there isn't a bit of jealousy lurking in the wings. I can imagine among the Queen's harem exists a slave who believes she should be assuming that position instead of Iona. Intriguing snippet, Joelle. Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeletethanks for the comment, Kathryn. I've never thought of any slave being jealous of another's place in the hierarchy. To me, The Queen's pleasure is the ultimate focus and each exists in relation to him, mostly. Also one's class is dependent more on things like "how many submissives you are trusted with" (for classes 1 through 3) and fourth class is "you are still new." Mind you, that includes at least one submissive who has been with him for a year. But yes, a paddling accompanying a promotion- it makes sense to me because a paddling isn't about a punishment, but pleasure.
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