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Friday, January 24, 2014

#SatSpanks ... Iona receives her promotion spanking

8 or so sentences from writers who love to spank or be spanked. Please enjoy my snippet and then move onto the other hoppers- their links are at the bottom of this post.

First I'd like to give credit where it's due: Kathryn R. Blake's blurb before her Saturday Spankings blog hop snippets prompted me to write this. It was in reading about her focus on male/female stories, where the male lovingly guides his woman that I thought seriously that maybe I should make sure readers know where I'm coming from. My stories aren't just male/female, even if those be the genders having sex in a snippet I'm showing. My focus, in life and in writing, is polyamorous and pansexual. Gender and sexual orientations and presentations are individual to the character being presented. Behavior also doesn't predict or determine gender and naming is a sacred thing. Yes, between The Queen's legs are a penis and testicles, but The Queen is still his name.

So I'm proving this week that I can control my teasing :D. You got to enjoy The Queen waking up Vala and the beginning of Iona's promotion ceremony here and then last week you enjoyed him positioning Iona, Greta, and Vala for the ceremony. Now get ready for the paddling- it's a big paddle The Queen's wielding :D. I went a few little lines over 8; I hope Mistress Blake doesn't mind too much, but I am ever so ready for a spanking, if she decides I deserve it :D


A grateful smile slid across Iona's lips as The Queen lifted her robe above her waist.

"Iona, do you accept this paddling in recognition of your rise in authority in my stable?"

"Yes, my Queen," Iona murmured, her lips trembling expectantly.

The Queen struck Iona's ass with the paddle, the dampness of her crotch muffling the sound. "Iona, do you accept this paddling in recognition of your rise in authority in my stable?"

"Yes, my Queen," Iona breathed.

The Queen struck Iona's upper thighs with her paddle, the other slaves releasing a communal sigh of pleasure.

"Look at your submissives before you. See their devotion to you. You have authority over them. Use it wisely."

42 comments:

  1. Good for you. I think every author should explore all the avenues where their life and imagination takes them. And no, I don't think you deserve a spanking for living the life you want to lead, unless of course you want one. ;-)

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    1. Well Master took care of it when I jokingly told Him about how yes I have another confirmation of how I'm "wired differently"- one of His favorite jokes... because yes, Iona gets to paddle whacks for promotion :D. But see? The blurb inspired by your blurb was nothing to be worried about. Although maybe I should add something about spankings hehe. Thanks for the comment, Kathryn

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  2. Ooh, very nice Joelle ... ouch! "the other slaves releasing a communal sigh of pleasure". Love that!

    Hugs,
    Roz

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    1. Thanks, Roz. Yup, Iona is a beauty and I just imagine them all watching. Since I'm not sure I've said or specifically shown- one of the fantastic details in my story- the number of The Queen's slaves. Including Vala, whose story I'm writing, it's 19. So with Vala and Greta kneeling in front of Iona, that's 16 who are just watching. Although Iona's girls, kneeling there, holding her hands, I suspect they'd sigh too at Iona's pleasure.

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  3. What Kathryn said. Explore all the thingzzz! Also, I liked the excerpt and thanks for posting it!

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    1. Thanks for the comment, Sheri, glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes I think it's good to make sure others know where we're coming from :) and yeah, exploration is definitely good.

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  4. I agree with Kathryn, you write what you feel called to write.
    Communal spankings are such fun to write too.

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    1. thanks for the comment, Jaye. Yes, communal spankings are way fun. Writing this "Ceremony day" was great. Way more possible snippets for Saturday Spankings than I've shown, although a few of them require quite a bit of back story, so aren't so good for snippeting.

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  5. Interesting concept, getting spanked FOR a promotion, I'm jealous.. Nice piece of writing and a great tease.

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    1. Thanks for the comment, Leigh. Well it's like I joked with Kathryn, my Master joking that I'm wired differently. It's one of those things that sometimes gives me pause in spanking fiction- I enjoy the spankings so much. They aren't how my Master punishes, when He has cause to. And it made sense to me to bring that into my story.

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    1. thanks for the comment, Cara. It's a fun balance, writing The Queen's formality without making him too formal. It was one of those decisions I had to make early in writing, if he would follow medium or high BDSM protocol. I ended up deciding on medium and letting him keep days like this for his enjoyment.

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  7. Turned around, different, intriguing - you've hit it all with this. I love to see life from different angles and you've done that here.

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    1. thanks, PK. I think it's fun to see how different people live. For me, Saturday Spankings is often a reminder of what life looks like for heterosexual, monogamous couples, a life path that I simply don't understand. Not to say bad, just something I've never experienced.

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  8. Very intense scene, Joelle. Love the warning, 'use it wisely'. That may come into play later.

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    1. thanks, Mary. yes, "use it wisely"- it's fun because the next 1/3 of the book probably is the after ceremony celebrations. I'm having fun with those over on Seductive Studs and Sirens. This week I'm starting with a scene including The Queen, Tommy, and Simon. so m/m/m action :D

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  9. I loved this, Joelle. The 'big' paddle. Her profession in front of the other slaves. And I really liked the communal sigh when she got the first smack from that paddle.
    Great job!

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    1. thanks, LA :) Well The Queen does love his ceremony and Iona's a good girl to do as he wants :D

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  10. It's clear Iona not only loves her Queen, she loves a taste of her Queen's paddle too.

    PS Best stay well clear of Mistress Blake. She found out I called her a scary big-nosed old trout and she's after me with a big stick:D

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    1. But but :D I only had the most wonderfully brown-nosing comments for Mistress Blake

      Thanks for the comment, Abigail. yes, the paddling is quite nice. Even re-reading it, I still give a happy sigh at Iona's paddling

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  11. Naming is a sacred thing - even if we do not know it at the time. I'm curious how you came to that - I do absolutely agree.

    Sensual snippet Joelle.

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    1. thanks, Natasha.

      Well about naming, I've had so many friends who for one reason or another couldn't or didn't want to keep the name given to them by their parents at birth. While Vala's back story of abuse is a topic in "Out of the Night: Book One," in "Gates of the Garden: Book Two" The Queen talks more with his slaves about his own history. It can be easier to separate yourself from something badly hurtful with different words.

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  12. Joelle, can I just say, as another who writes what she feels, that I treasure you? :)

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    1. aww thanks, Emily :) as I treasure you :) I've enjoyed many a snippet on your blog... and will eventually get back to explorations

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  13. I love the way Iona accepts and welcomes what's happening, and the respect of The Queen for her. Great snippet, intense, thanks.

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    1. and thanks for the comment, Ashe :). It's funny, the idea of Iona not welcoming the ceremony and even the paddling that's part of it, never occurred to me as I was writing it. but yes, the respect and value The Queen feels for Iona, even with her being his BDSM slave. I'm of the POV that BDSM roles, no matter how sincerely held, don't mean a power imbalance other than what is negotiated. She isn't less than him.

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  14. Joelle, I love the way your mind thinks and I love this snippet. The slaves devotion to her is lovely, I'm glad the Queen reminded her to use her authority wisely :)

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    1. thanks for the comment, Constance. I do so love the language I put into the ceremonies too :)

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  15. I love the promotion ceremony-- delicious!

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  16. Absolutely love this. It captures the essence of a submissives adoration as well as Iona's own compliance to the discipline she is receiving to remind her that with power comes responsibility.

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    1. thanks for the comment, Jolynn :) it's nice as an author when one's intent shines through to readers :)

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  17. A spanking given in front of spectators makes it even better (or worse depending upon your point of view). There is a certain something special added to the mix when there are witnesses to the act. Thanks for posting!

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    1. and thanks for the comment, Trent. It's interesting how your comment got me thinking of this story-verse- The Queen and his slaves are more like a family, so I see this scene as analogous to a family singing "Happy Birthday" before a person blows out the candles on a birthday cake. But yes, witnesses definitely add to a moment like this, wherever the intent or form lay

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  18. Attributed to Stan Lee (through his Uncle Ben character): "With great power comes great responsibility." Having dominion over other slaves has to be approached with the utmost care. I think you got that across.

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    1. Does it give me any geek cred that I can hear that line in my head? but thanks for the comment, Patricia. that is such an important part of this story-verse- the responsibility that the 1st through 3 class slaves have over the 4th, then the 1st over the 2nd and 3rd

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  19. Does this mean Iona gets to paddle the other two?

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  20. hm, it looks like blogger ate my explanation...

    Quick lesson in The Queen's stable's hierarchy. :D There's The Queen at the top, he has 2 first class slaves only slightly less in authority than him. Then Iona's in the second class with this promotion. She has the girls under her direct domination. So while it's not part of the ceremony, she could choose to paddle them if she pleased- only The Queen and the first class boys could contradict her. However more often she prefers candle wax over corporal punishment as a domme, hence why more often than not, on Saturday Spankings, if she gets shown, it's as a submissive

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  21. The muffled sound of her crotch oh my!

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    1. thanks Suzy- isn't it a lovely ting to imagine :)

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  22. Loved this! Very tight and succinct - well done!
    Hope you have time to stop by my first attempt at hopping..lolxx

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    1. thanks for the comment, KL :) I'll certainly get to your blog :D The number of sign ups for Satspanks on top of Love Spanks is just amazing though

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